Okay, Guys.
Here I am, inside your virtual room.
There is no refrigerator here.
There is no TV here.
There is no soft bed here.
There is nothing.
So each of you should 'go shopping' (looking for things to enliven this room).
First, please visit the following link:
http://www.englishforeveryone.org/Topics/Writing-Practice.htm
Then you will see 12 unfinished stories on the page.
Choose one story (any level) and finish the story. The end of the story is completely up to you. So feel free to continue the story. You shall type the whole story here on this blog. I expect by the end of next week there will be about 30 different stories.
Have fun.
Cheers,
Agus
Here I am, inside your virtual room.
There is no refrigerator here.
There is no TV here.
There is no soft bed here.
There is nothing.
So each of you should 'go shopping' (looking for things to enliven this room).
First, please visit the following link:
http://www.englishforeveryone.org/Topics/Writing-Practice.htm
Then you will see 12 unfinished stories on the page.
Choose one story (any level) and finish the story. The end of the story is completely up to you. So feel free to continue the story. You shall type the whole story here on this blog. I expect by the end of next week there will be about 30 different stories.
Have fun.
Cheers,
Agus
Komentar ini telah dihapus oleh pengarang.
BalasHapusToday is my birthday. I am having a big party at my house. I invited everyone in my class. I hope that they all come. My doorbell is ringing. I answer it. Three of my friends are at the door! The rest of my friends arrive. It is time for the party to begin. First, we play games. We play pin the tail on the donkey. Jasmine wins. My mom gives her a prize. She is very happy. I am happy that my friends are having fun. We also play tag and musical chairs. Next, we eat cake. My favorite kind of cake is chocolate with vanilla icing. My mom made a special cake for me. She wrote “Happy Birthday” onit in red icing. Mom lights the candles. My friends
BalasHapussing the birthday song. I make a wish and blow outmy candles. Now it is time to open presents. Jack hands me the first present. I unwrap it and open the box.
After I open the box when the sparks fly in it still another box, I was rushed to open the second box-shaped beams and are still wrapped in a box, it makes me even more curious about the contents of the gift. Meanwhile my friends laughed when I opened the gift as there are layered plywood box to unwrap it. I lost my curiosity changed the happiness and was amazed to see the box into four display phones iphone 7. the goods are what I want since 5 months ago. Finally I got the item in my birthday present that to 17 years. I am very happy and grateful to God and grateful to my parents and friends. Then continue the party in the back, which at the moment awaited by many guests that dinner and accompanied by the music ACOUSTIK were brought by my theme. Only this time it felt as vibrant birthday. After the party was over at 9 pm and friends return with a greeting to me and my parents. But the job is not finished cleaning the house tidying and me back the next day. Sleep at night when it is very soundly at all because of fatigue mixed with pleasure.
Today I am going on a class field trip to the zoo. I have never been to the zoo before and I am excited to see all of the animals. My teacher saysthat it is going to be a busy day. We have been learning about animals in class. My favorite animal is the elephant. I hope that I get to see one. We are boarding the bus. I sit in the back of the bus with my friends. The ride is about thirty minutes long. We are walking through the gate. I am in a group with five of my classmates and my teacher. The zoo is very crowded with lots of students from other schools. I hope that I will not get lost from my group. First, we visit the monkeys. They come to the edgeof their cages and look at us. The monkeys have a lot of trees to climb on in their cages. One monkey is eating a banana. They look like they are having a lot of fun. I wonder what it would be like to play with them. Next, we visit the polar bears. They live in an area that has a lot of big rocks and a pond. Most of them are sleeping right now. The polar bears are a lot bigger than I imagined them being! My teacher says that we are going to see the elephants now. We walk for a long time until we finally get to a big field. I can see the elephants in the distance! There are two big elephants and one baby. They are starting to walk in our direction. Maybe I will get a closer look at them.
BalasHapusI’m very excited to see the elephants in front of me. I give food to the elephants. I am very happy to see elephants at close. After that we visit the lion. I saw lions eating meat with gusto. Lion has very large body. Lion is a carnivorous animal. After that we visit the bird cages, there are many types of birds, such as doves, parrots, crows, and many others. After that we visit the giraffe. Giraffes have very long necks to reach food in trees. I also like giraffe. After that we visit the orangutans. They look like a monkey. I see the orangutans climb the trees and eating a banana. After see the all animals we take a rest and get a lunch. After that we prepare to go home. I became a lot to know the types of animals. After already surrounds all animal enclosures we got ready to go home.
The beach trip.
BalasHapusI had a fun day today. I went to the beach with my family. It was my first time I had gone to the
beach in North Carolina.
We woke up early and drove for two hours until we reached the beach. There was a lot of traffic.
We finally found a parking spot and walked to the sand. It was pretty outside and the beach was very
crowded. There were a lot of kids playing.
My dad set up a big umbrella. I laid my towel out on the sand. My mom helped me put on
sunscreen. I didn’t want to get sunburned.
I walked down to the water and stuck my toes in. The water was warm. It felt good. I walked back
to my family and told my brother to come swimming with me.
“I don’t want to,” he said.
“Why not?” I asked.
“I’m afraid of sharks,” he said. ---
--- "There's no shark here. Don't tease me please haha" I said.
"We don't know huh" he said annoyed.
"Everything will be okay. It's gonna be really fun. This is our first time, don't waste it. Come on" I said convince.
"Okay, I go with you." he said with sullen-face.
Then we went to buoy rental center to borrow two buoys for me and my brother. I was borrowed buoy with flamingo design. And my brother was borrowed buoy with pizza shape. We were happy because the wave was calm, so we can relax on the buoy. The color of sea was blue, and so clear. The sea matched with the sky. I never saw the view like this before. Me and my brother do not forget to took many photos of us or the view. Then we're bored, we choose to played sand together and built a castle by the sand. It's doesn't feel, the day wore on, and the sun was getting hotter, we went back to our umbrella. Next, we get a lunch, we ate with a big lobster in the restaurant near the beach. And finally, its afternoon. Our planning to saw the sunset is failed, because the sky is cloudy. We decided to go home already. On the way, the rains was running down. Even if we failed to saw the sun goes down, we're still happy.
Today is my birthday. I am having a big party at my house. I invited everyone in my class. I hope that they all come.
BalasHapusMy doorbell is ringing. I answer it. Three of my friends are at the door! The rest of my friends arrive. It is time for the party to begin.
First, we play games. We play pin the tail on the donkey. Jasmine wins. My mom gives her a prize. She is very happy. I am happy that my friends are having fun. We also play tag and musical chairs.
Next, we eat cake. My favorite kind of cake is chocolate with vanilla icing. My mom made a special cake for me. She wrote “Happy Birthday” on it in red icing. Mom lights the candles. My friends sing the birthday song. I make a wish and blow out my candles.
Now it is time to open presents. Jack hands me the first present. I unwrap it and open the box. When I open the box I was very shock, because jack give me a “semur jengkol” yaaa, when I saw that present I feel arrrgghhhhh it was very annoying, but jack told me that I must eat it as a sign that I respect the present from him. By holding disgust I eat it, but soon I had to spew it. Then the second present came from jasmine, I unwrape it and wow, I got a beautifull dress frpm her, I very like it, and I cant wait to wear that dress. And the last present from Jeje I have unwrapped, I was confused because I just saw paper trash in the box, but Jeje told me that I must search thing among that paper trash, finally I found that thing, evidently she give me a liontin who into the liontin there was our photo. I am very happy because I was so close with my 3 friends. After I have unwrapped all of the present I said “ thanks to all my friend, I am very happy, thanks for the present, I love you..”.
That was my birthday party. I am very grateful, because in my birthday party I could celebrate it with my family and my friend. I hope I can always celebrate with them.
Today I am going on a class field trip to the zoo. I have never been to the zoo before and I am excited to see all of the animals. My teacher says that it is going to be a busy day. We have been learning about animals in class. My favorite animal is the elephant. I hope that I get to see one. We are boarding the bus. I sit in the back of the bus with my friends. The ride is about thirty minutes long. We are walking through the gate. I am in a group with five of my classmates and my teacher. The zoo is very crowded with lots of students from other schools. I hope that I will not get lost from my group.
BalasHapusFirst, we visit the monkeys. They come to the edge of their cages and look at us. The monkeys have a lot of trees to climb on in their cages. One monkey is eating a banana. They look like they are having a lot of fun. I wonder what it would be like to play with them. Next, we visit the polar bears. They live in an area that has a lot of big rocks and a pond. Most of them are sleeping right now. The polar bears are a lot bigger than I imagined them being! My teacher says that we are going to see the elephants now. We walk for a long time until we finally get to a big field. I can see the elephants in the distance! There are two big elephants and one baby.
They are starting to walk in our direction. Maybe I will get a closer look at them. It’s stunning how they can get eat and drink with their trunks. I learned There are two elephant species that are usually recognized the African elephant and the Asian elephant. After that, we visit the penguins made we chuckle, they are so charming! It’s unusual to believe they’re a feathered creature that can’t fly. While different winged animals have wings for flying, they have adjusted their flippers for swimming.
In the zoo there were also so many rare and protected animals such as the Sumatran tiger, Cendrawasih birds and many more. I also took our picture together with the animals which were in the zoo. After satisfied going around the zoo, we returned to the picnic area to had rest and lunch. Promptly at 12 o’clock we had lunch together in picnic spot. After lunch we relaxed for a while.After time showed at 14:00 we all went home. That day I was very pleased to be able to spend my time with my class.
The Snow Day.
BalasHapusMy sister woke me up early this morning. she ran into my room before the alarm clock went off. "Look outside!" she yelled. I got out of bed and looked out the window. All that I could see was white snow! There was a man shoveling the sidewalk in front of our house. Mom came into the room. she brought us each a mug of hot chocolate. "No school today!" she said. I was very happy. My sister was happy, too. Mom left the room to find our snow clothes. She gave me my blue snowsuit. She also gave me a hat and mittens. "What are you going to do today with no school?" she asked.
"Mom we want to play in the snow outside the house, may I?" said sister. Today we are planning to go skiing near the house. we always look forward to the snow season, because of the snow when winter becomes beautiful scenery. Initialy my mom was worried don't allow us to play outside the house. My sister continue to persuade her. Finally my mom allowed us to play otside the house. "Okay, but you have to promise not to play to long and far!" said mom. Winter we have to wear clothes, that are layered, thick, jacket, snowsuit, scarves, socks, and gloves.
My mom put a snowsuit and hat for us. "Thank you mom, we'll be home soon" said sister. Then we left the house takes the sky. Brrrrrrrrr....very cold, said sister. I couldn't sky very clever, my sister while skiing. This time my sister tought me. I fall many times, it was not easy to sky. But this is so much fun.
The air was so cold, it snowed more swift. we are hurried home. It turned out that my mom was already waiting for us outside the home My mom had prepared hot chocolate for our drinks, and then we tell everything to my mother.
Today is my birthday. I had a big party at my house. I invited everyone in my class. I hope that they all come. I rang the bell. I answered. Three of my friends at the front door! The rest of my friends arrived. It is time for the party to start. First, we play the game. We played pin the tail on the donkey. Jasmine won. My mother gave her a gift. He was very happy. I am glad that my friends are having fun. We also played tag and musical chairs. Next, we ate cake. my favorite kind of chocolate cake with vanilla icing. My mother made a special cake for me. He wrote "Happy Birthday" onit in red icing. Mom lit a candle. My friends
BalasHapussang a birthday song. I make a wish and blow out the candles outmy. Now it's time to open presents. Jack first attended my hand. I opened it and open up an attractive gift box.
Once I opened the package I would be happy to see the contents of the parcel box, namely football boots I've wanted for a long time I finally get my birthday present that to 15 years. I am very happy and grateful to God and thanking parents and my friends. Then continue the party behind the house, which at the moment awaited by many invited guests and dinner was accompanied by guitar music was brought by my theme. I feel this time it was the birthday anniversary special in my life. After the party ended at 12 o'clock at night and friends back with greetings and congratulations to me and my parents. then after that I was cleaning the house tidying up, and then I slept that night with a very happy juice
Today I will be in a class field trip to the zoo. I've never been to a zoo before and I
BalasHapusexcited to see all the animals. My teacher said that it would be a busy day. We have learned
about animals in the classroom. My favorite animal is the elephant. I wish that I could see one.
We rode the bus. I sat in the back of the bus with my friends. The trip is about thirty
minute. We walked through the gate. I was in a group with five of my classmates and my teacher.
This zoo is very crowded with many students from other schools. I hope that I will not stray from me
group.
First, we visited the monkey. They came to the edge of their cages and see us. monkeys have
many trees to climb in their cages. One of the monkeys eat bananas. They look like they have
a lot of fun. I wonder what it would be like to play with them.
Next, we visit the polar bears. They live in an area that has a lot of big rocks and ponds. mostly
they are sleeping now. The polar bears are much bigger than I imagined them to be!
My teacher said that we would see elephants now. We walked for a long time until we
finally get to the big field. I could see the elephants in the distance! There are two big elephants and one baby.
They started walking toward us. Maybe I'll take a closer look at them.I was very impressed when he first saw the elephant, the end I can see the favorite animal looks really great and her look young and new funny. i know that the adult elephants is very large and has ivory strong, they have long eyelashes and has a trunk that long , no there is an interesting experience apart during a visit at the zoo, in addition we learned about the animals around us can also be entertained with their behavior.
Let's preserve endangered animals so that they continue to grow and not become extinct.
Today I will be in a class field trip to the zoo. I've never been to a zoo before and I
BalasHapusexcited to see all the animals. My teacher said that it would be a busy day. We have learned
about animals in the classroom. My favorite animal is the elephant. I wish that I could see one.
We rode the bus. I sat in the back of the bus with my friends. The trip is about thirty
minute. We walked through the gate. I was in a group with five of my classmates and my teacher.
This zoo is very crowded with many students from other schools. I hope that I will not stray from me
group.
First, we visited the monkey. They came to the edge of their cages and see us. monkeys have
many trees to climb in their cages. One of the monkeys eat bananas. They look like they have
a lot of fun. I wonder what it would be like to play with them.
Next, we visit the polar bears. They live in an area that has a lot of big rocks and ponds. mostly
they are sleeping now. The polar bears are much bigger than I imagined them to be!
My teacher said that we would see elephants now. We walked for a long time until we
finally get to the big field. I could see the elephants in the distance! There are two big elephants and one baby.
They started walking toward us. Maybe I'll take a closer look at them.I was very impressed when he first saw the elephant, the end I can see the favorite animal looks really great and her look young and new funny. i know that the adult elephants is very large and has ivory strong, they have long eyelashes and has a trunk that long , no there is an interesting experience apart during a visit at the zoo, in addition we learned about the animals around us can also be entertained with their behavior.
Let's preserve endangered animals so that they continue to grow and not become extinct.
Today is my birthday. I am having a big party at my house. I invited everyone in my class. I hope that they all come.
BalasHapusMy doorbell is ringing. I answer it. Three of my friends are at the door! The rest of my friends arrive. It is time for the party to begin.
First, we play games. We play pin the tail on the donkey. Jasmine wins. My mom gives her a prize. She is very happy. I am happy that my friends are having fun. We also play tag and musical chairs.
Next, we eat cake. My favorite kind of cake is chocolate with vanilla icing. My mom made a special cake for me. She wrote “Happy Birthday” on it in red icing. Mom lights the candles. My friends sing the birthday song. I make a wish and blow out my candles.
Now it is time to open presents. Jack hands me the first present. I unwrap it and open the box. Once I opened the box, I was very surprised because inside the box is an item that I really wanted yes thats vans shoes. I am very grateful to Jack for the gifts he gave to me. Then my other friend give me another gift. Memorable gift from my friend that is a gift from a girl I liked, she gave a watch and a letter. At that point I immediately read the letter in my heart, I read the letter with my heart.
Then the party continued with acoustic music scene. my friends and me sang along the tunes. At the end I would like to thank my parents who have held this party and I would like to thank my friends who have attended and enlivened my birthday party.
by Dwi roso kusumo
14030116060089
I have special plans for Halloween this year. Sam’
BalasHapuss Halloween party is next Friday. I want to have
the best costume at the party. My mom says that sh
e will help me make my costume. I want to be
something scary.
“You should be a ghost,” says my sister.
“Ghosts are boring,” I tell her.
“What about a witch?” my brother asks.
“That is a good idea,” I tell him.
I talk to Mom at breakfast the next morning. “I am
going to be a witch,” I say.
“That is a great idea,” Mom says. “How are you goi
ng to make your witch costume scary?” my sister said.
"Just calm mama that will make a scary witch costume for me!" I said
"Yes mom would make most excellent costumes and scary costumes your friends." Mom said.
The next day Mom started to prepare the material that will be used to make a costume that I want. After completion made costumes mama mama told me to try the costumes,
"Finished" says Mom.
"What has been completed mama?" My sister bertanaya.
"Costume brother has been completed" says Mom.
"Wahh ..! it turns out the costumes have been so "I said.
"This costume you want, whether you like it?" Says Mom.
"Yes, mama I love the costumes with black color and length, looks scary. Thank you mama "I said.
When Friday arrived, before I went to a Halloween party. I prepared myself to wear a costume that has been created by the mother, with a scary face makeup, Make mama costumes made more daunting.
After arriving at the party, I met with a friend - my friend.
"Hi!" To greet my friend.
"Hi!! Take a look at my costume, how is frightening what is not? "I said.
"Wow !!, you look scary with witch costume you're wearing tonight" said my friend.
"Who's already made costumes this witch?" Said my friend.
"I certainly scary because tonight I want to be a witch and a mama who've made this costume for me," I said.
"You too scary costumes, costume what you are wearing tonight?" I asked.
"This evening I dressed zombie" says my friend.
Then we enjoyed the Halloween party with a dark atmosphere with light yellow and scary costumes.
The Beach Trip
BalasHapusI had a fun day today. I went to the beach with my family. It was my first time I had gone to the beach in North Carolina.
We woke up early and drove for two hours until we reached the beach. There was a lot of traffic. We finally found a parking spot and walked to the sand. It was pretty outside and the beach was very crowded. There were a lot of kids playing.
My dad set up a big umbrella. I laid my towel out on the sand. My mom helped me put on sunscreen. I didn't want to get sunburned.
I walked down to the water and stuck my toes in. The water was warm. It felt good. I walked back to my family and told my brother to come swimming with me.
"I don't want to," he said.
"Why not?" I asked.
"I'm afraid of sharks," he said.
"There's no sharks here," I said.
"But I'm still scared," he said.
"There will be no nothing. It's safe," I said.
After I begged him in the end he gonna follow me down to the shore. Initially he was just on the fence the beach with drowning his feet.
"The water's warm," he said.
I asked her to be heading to the deep water. He's scared but I convinced him not to be afraid.
"It's beautiful the scenery," he said.
"Of course beautiful. Let's swim," I took him.
"Let's go," he said.
My brother and I swim while my mother and father just sit under the big umbrella of while enjoying the scenery accompanied by some snacks and young coconut.
I swim hand and feet wrinkles. I decided to end it. My brother and I get to the point my mom and dad are.
I enjoy young coconut and some snacks that are taken by my mother.
"Its's beautiful," I said while looking at the beach.
I really enjoyed my vacation. I want to build a house near the beach to continue to feel the cool air the beach and beautiful scenery.
SUMMER CAMP.
BalasHapusToday was my first day at summer camp! I had a lot of fun. I had to wake up very early. My dad dropped me off at the park and I met my counselor. Her name was Jamie. There were nine other people in my group.
The first thing that we did was go on a nature hike. The hike was long. We walked through the entire park. I saw two squirrels and a rabbit. I was afraid that I was going to see a snake. It was hot and I got a lot of bug bites.
After the hike, we had arts and crafts. I made a bookmark to take home with me. I colored it blue and used a lot of glitter.
After arts and crafts, we played my favorite game! And my favorite game is hide and seek. For others people this is a regular game but, in my eyes this is spectacular game. Because I play this game when my age 5th in my village. We finally play this game and this is my turn for seek my friend. I nimble in this case, because I heard footsteps and I very shock because my friend hide on bush with a man behind him, the man has no face. I could only stood shocked and I can’t move even an inch. It was really terrifying. “Heck, you found me!” My friend jumped off from the bush. Hence, I could only stood still, there’s a frozen chilling feeling grasps through my feet. My eyes still looked at that thing. It has really long arms, bulky muscles, and… no face. A thousands of thoughts rambled through my mind. Then, at one glance, the guy disappeared. I was scared shitless.
I woke up in my bed, the camp had ended. Lucky for me, I didn’t encounter that creepy creature again. But the thoughts of that faceless guy still haven’t got out of my mind, it haunted me through all the summer. I washed my face, then I took a cigarette. I’m contemplating of what happened to me, realizing that it won’t get over anytime soon. I wanted to tell my pops, I thought they won’t believe my story, but I did it anyway. The evening, we gathered for dinner. There were my parents and my older brother. I told them the entire story of what happened at the summer camp. They couldn’t do nothing but giggled at me. I was right, they won’t believe me. I went to my room right away. The hell with my pops won’t believed me, I thought that I could handle this all by myself. I tried to shut my eyes, hoping after I wake up everything will be back to normal. I’m halfway to sleep, not so long until something knocked at my window. Turns out it was my brother. He asked me to open the door. After that, I continued my sleep.
The next morning, I came to psychiatrist. I told everything about my summercamp. After that, I got therapy for my mental problem. Finally after 2 month, I had to forget my shit experience.